TheBigLobe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wii-mote: Crime Deterrent]

Great!

The animation was really good and I liked that. The only thing I'd suggest fixing is the voices. It sounds like your right up against the mic and you can basically hear every wheeze, breath, and all that jazz.

Looked very great! Good job for a 2 week animation!

[-failure-]

I liked it!

Very well animated and all around nice. The only problem I had was the music. The loop just didn't seem to work with there being a small scratch at the end of it then looping.

Otherwise, great!

[Let's PQ! Pt.1]

Eh...

I didn't really care for it too much. Some suggestions to help make it a little better:

White behind the text - Make a freaking text box so that the writing is a lot easier on the eyes. Seriously, it's nearly impossible to read and my eyes will thank you.

Sprites could use work - The cut outs aren't very good at all and a few touch ups in photoshop (or hell, mspaint) could help greatly.

Story - Yeah... nothing much there to comment on. Just a crap story for a first episode. Make it longer and everyone will like you more. :)

That's all I can think up now. I think there was one more, but I can't remember it at the moment.

chouji7 responds:

ok, keep looking for Pt.2, and rate it high when you see ive used your advice!
:P

[I dream of Moons]

I liked it

I normally don't really care for clock crew stuff. But I personally liked it! Nice job for a first flash too. At least better than what my first flash is turning out to be.

Kudos!

[=Phoenix Wright Tribute=]

Perfect

Normally I wouldn't really care for actually giving something like this a high score. But since you've managed to piss off so many people on NG, I'm giving you a five.

With people like you making stuff like this and people reviewing this as it is, it's still a wonder as to how people appreciate Jerry Jackson cartoons.

Anyway, thanks for the laughs on the reviews! :D

Starberry responds:

jerry jackson is a facade but i hope you already know that

anyway the jerry jackson movies arent like this anyway they're made to be dumb not to entice

[Throwback the Duck Ep. 0]

Well done!

I applaud to what you've done! This is by far one of the best flash movies I've seen on newgrounds in a good while! Really well animated, great sound, and Kirby winning against a duck!

There was really nothing wrong with this at all, great job! Here's hoping this hits big!

[sonic stupid situations 2]

Fix your grammar and I'll be happy

I'm not blamming this because I hate sprite movies, I'm blamming it because of some of the bad syncing and the bad grammar at some spots.

In the beginning, it's "looks" not "look" and when Amy was talking it was in her dialogue.

As for the bad syncing, it was in the Final Fantasy spot, when the enemies attacked the actions happened after the sound. And the text in the middle annoyed my eyes. :(

Anyway, if you fix those, I'm sure this flash would have a higher score.

[Environmental]

I did laugh, but just because I've been grumpy

That was really a nice piece of work and the drawings were great! The only problem I had with it was just the message in general.
Recycling has always been a big thing in the world, problem is, we know very little of it. Especially when it takes more resources to recreate paper and plastic! Tin is something we should recycle because that actually has a fair amount of money in it. As for the whole tree falling on the deer (which made me laugh so hard I almost died), it can happen, but more trees are planted in it's place. Destruction may be happening, but we're adding on to it by planting more.
The other problem I had was with some of the earlier reviews that I read. Seriously people! It's your choice of whether or not you want to watch these videos! Not the artists! This guy just happened to make it for a college class and thought that it would be good to put it up on Newgrounds so that the rest of us can watch it and give a review.
Sorry folks, but "eat shit and die" isn't a review! =)

[[ muffins ]]

Holy crap!

That was way too random. But damn, you scared the living hell out of me and it made me laugh so hard.

Not good choice on the whole nazi bit, but funny in general.

NewEvolution responds:

OBJECTIVE ACHIEVED!

HAH. Yeah, the Nazi bit might be a little risque, but it quadruples the random and gets the laughs.

Glad you dug it!

[Crematorium]

Could use some more work

At the beginning of the flash, you can see a couple of spots where the stick figure's body manages to show through the head instead of the head being layered on top of it. And at the credits some of your words were falling off to the right of the screen.