Eh...
I didn't really care for it too much. Some suggestions to help make it a little better:
White behind the text - Make a freaking text box so that the writing is a lot easier on the eyes. Seriously, it's nearly impossible to read and my eyes will thank you.
Sprites could use work - The cut outs aren't very good at all and a few touch ups in photoshop (or hell, mspaint) could help greatly.
Story - Yeah... nothing much there to comment on. Just a crap story for a first episode. Make it longer and everyone will like you more. :)
That's all I can think up now. I think there was one more, but I can't remember it at the moment.